A Review of Personal Web Page by Aaran Casey

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  • Aaran Casey

    Aaran Casey

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 2
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    Posted on Jan 26, 2010 at 2:18 PM

    Hi Adam

    I am not sure really how to review this, I like the idea, cool...

    I hate the logo, the font FFF Tsuji - is nice but overall it's too small, and not that original.

    I like the idea of flipping the phone, but I think when that happens the page needs to drop as well so that you do not cut off any text. You say in the grey box below "my $0.02... jQuery best practices...etc" - yet you have't used it! If you're going to state an opinion, back it up.

    Overall the design is rather bland, you could make this site look super coole, like interchanging backgrounds that have been taken on your iphone etc (this is also a jQuery script)

    Great idea just needs a few tweaks... good luck!

    • Adam Tal
      Adam Tal commented:
      Posted: on Jan 27, 2010 at 4:37 AM

      Haha, I was wondering if anyone would notice the jQuery code:) I'll clean it up as I go:)

      I liked the idea of moving stuff when the iPhone turns to give it space.

      Thanks, this review was really helpful.

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