A Review of Website Redesign Pitch - Cure International by Matthew Trubow

Hi Joel,

I hope you're well.

If this company don't hire you, they would be making a big mistake.

You've managed to make the company look a lot more professional, organised and modern without going outside of the original theme.

If I am to be pedantic for your benefit I would say to make a couple of items a little more prominent.

The phrase 'heal changes everything' is powerful and tugs at the heart-strings, which is what you want. I think it could do with being in a softer font, perhaps something that is a smooth script face.

The second area I would draw a little more attention to is the 'Stay in touch. Sign Up!' area. This news letter is a valuable marketing mechnism for their audience. It's a bit washed-out in my opinion.

Again - nice work. I'd hire ya.

Good luck with the job.

Kind regards,

Matt