A Review of SPEAK by Guy Blaskey

pattern on shirt

  • Guy Blaskey

    Guy Blaskey

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 5
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    pattern on shirt

    Posted on Jan 20, 2010 at 8:09 AM

    it looks like there is a bit of a pattern on the guy's shirt (bottom right) - you should photoshop it out - otherwise very engaging image

    • ivan ospina
      ivan ospina commented:
      Posted: on Jan 20, 2010 at 11:07 PM

      i really like it, but maybe if you change the background color.. to a tone or withe, also if you can play more with the font :)

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    • Fenson Jeremy
      Fenson Jeremy commented:
      Posted: on Jan 20, 2010 at 11:57 PM

      Hi Ican Ospina,

      The reason I left the background as it is is to create a sense of depth like I said in an earlier comment above. This is a serious poster, and I think I've played enough with the typography as it is.

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