A Review of LMC Version 2 by Andy E

use content organization from 2nd concept

  • Andy E

    Andy E

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    use content organization from 2nd concept

    Posted on Jan 19, 2010 at 1:20 PM

    I like the top and middle of the first concept, but the products and markets organization in the 2nd. The 2nd style of organization gives a quick hit of the information and allows the viewer to click to read more if interested.

    I feel like the hand-written message about the online system is almost completely redundant. I think I would use a sans serif font for this section (and possibly headings) and keep the serif for the body text.

    As Taz mentioned, keep the search box simple and standard.