A Review of Portfolio Design by rupert durrant

Strong name and marque, the ribbons good too but not sure why you have it

  • rupert durrant

    rupert durrant

    Rank: 7 Student

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
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    Strong name and marque, the ribbons good too but not sure why you have it

    Posted on Aug 06, 2009 at 8:35 AM

    Strong brand name / marque, I like the flame and ribbon, but they don't seem to share an idea. Do you need both, wouldn't it be better to make more of the flame?

    Gets a bit busy with the multiple use of typefaces, but not sure I am looking at it right, as this is my first post. Not sure of the value of the wood top.

    • Josh Jackson
      Josh Jackson commented:
      Posted: on Aug 07, 2009 at 10:37 PM

      I'm not sure the designer has provided a reason, but for me, it does act as a visual guide to move my eye down the page.

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