A Review of SPEAK by Phyllis Zeck

Fix the poster.

  • Phyllis Zeck

    Phyllis Zeck

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

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    -1 Votes
    Fix the poster.

    Posted on Jan 18, 2010 at 7:07 PM

    I don't like the yellow poster on his shirt, it looks like you slapped up a post it note. I'd fix that. I'd remove all the commas in the line starting with: Monday. uneccessary.

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