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Love it! I'm all for activism and raising voices so this one struck me in one swift blow and I'm sure it'll have the same effect on your target audience.
I wouldn't change much of anything but I think you could really perfect the whole design if you'd cut down on the white space just a tad (there seems to be an unnecessary abundance of it), maaaybe add a border of some kind (although I'm not sure how well it would work out), align the title and date/time/location but most of all...
...why is he wearing a second poster? I had to stop and take a second look and just ask myself that question. I mean, I was totally drawn in by the guy with the duct taped mouth and the powerful heading but then I felt as though I had to convince myself to squint and read what was on the poster within the poster.
I don't know how large a format this poster is intended to be printed but, I'm just wondering, wouldn't it benefit tremendously if you used those same elements, in the same layout, in the actual poster itself? You know, logo centered on the bottom, copy aligned to the left, next to the guy, etc. What do you think?
Speak up!
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Fenson Jeremy commented:Thanks for the thorough comment.
The small poster was attached on the model during the photography process. It wasn't done in post processing. I wanted to have just enough information to attract audiences. For those who want to know more, that's what the small yellow poster is all about. It will be printed out in A0 size for it would be pretty readable from at least 3 feet.
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N.B. I don't know why everyone's complaining about the background. I happen to really like the fact that it preserves the "realness" of it all. (Keep it!)