A Review of I'm Selling Green Computers - E-commerce by Tommy Picard

Scale down the main graphic

  • Tommy Picard

    Tommy Picard

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    Scale down the main graphic

    Posted on Jun 05, 2009 at 6:43 PM

    I would scale down the main graphic on your website a bit. I didn't get a call to action on the main graphic without scrolling, which would make me less likely to continue on to the site. Just keep in mind that if your screen is large, the majority of people still are at 1280x960 or so, especially if they are on a lap top looking to upgrade. I would make the bottom of your graphic at the bottom edge of the ELECTRIC BILL text.

    I personally love your logo. It's clean and simple. Just conveying you are selling computers quickly is the key. Great job!

    • brett allcorn
      brett allcorn commented:
      Posted: on Jun 15, 2009 at 3:14 PM

      updated to your suggestions, if you've got time check it out:

      www.myleef.com/savings_2.php

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    • Tommy Picard
      Tommy Picard commented:
      Posted: on Jun 15, 2009 at 3:32 PM

      getting much better. you could still afford to even bring the computer up to the left of the "time to reduce your electric bill" and get a hint of those boxes at the bottom up on a monitor. i'm on a macbook & the computer image gets cut off when i visit the site.

      good job on the updates though!

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