A Review of Naval History Blog by Andy E

loosen it up

  • Andy E

    Andy E

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    loosen it up

    Posted on Jan 15, 2010 at 3:01 PM

    This is a great start. This theme matches the topic pretty well. I also like how the dates stick out from the content area.

    Maybe it's me, but it's hard to tell what the naval officer is doing at the top of the page. If others agree, maybe a more revealing picture would be appropriate.

    What's the significance of the orange title? It doesn't seem to fit the rest of the page. Maybe use dark blue with a white outline?

    The only other adjustment I would consider is line-height (I always comment on this). I feel like the lines should be separated more to allow for easier and quicker reading. More left/right padding could also help. Great work.

    • Scott Greenwell
      Scott Greenwell commented:
      Posted: on Jan 15, 2010 at 3:17 PM

      Ill try playing with the Title and the copy format ( line-height, padding, ect. ) With an older audience these would be extremely beneficial edits!