• Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Very nice

    Posted on Jan 14, 2010 at 1:46 PM

    Completely different from where you started, but I do like the progress. Here are some things I would do:

    1. Tighten up the navigation and align right.
    2. Add a tinted bar to the top of the page and put the line of text by the logo in the bar at the top.
    3. Add some sort of tagline within the logo header, maybe nested directly under the navigation?
    4. Lose the white board. It feels too literal and cartoony. I like your paper theme that you have, continue that theme to the inner pages.
    5. Add a footer to your pages here.

    This is a great start and is positioned to be a fantastic site, great work my friend!