A Review of Vision/Mission Poster by Josh Nielsen

I would try and widen the paragraphs, perhaps make them short and wide instead of tall and skinny

  • Josh Nielsen

    Josh Nielsen

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    I would try and widen the paragraphs, perhaps make them short and wide instead of tall and skinny

    Posted on Jan 13, 2010 at 5:49 PM

    I like the colors and I think the design as a whole is quite nice.

    I think you may be able to drop the DODEA MISSION and VIRTUAL HIGH SCHOOL VISION since it is a bit redundant given the large heading at top and bottom. then fill that area with a wider paragraph that runs along the top and bottom of the inner content. It may not work, but I find myself struggling to read the paragraphs since they have line breaks after every 2 or three words.

    • Angie
      Angie commented:
      Posted: on Jan 13, 2010 at 8:01 PM

      I think that's a great idea. I will test that out in the morning, I bet it will balance it out -- the small column was bugging me but I couldn't think where to put the text besides there!

      Thanks!

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    • Angie
      Angie commented:
      Posted: on Jan 14, 2010 at 5:05 PM

      Thanks again for the idea -- worked great I think!

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    • Josh Nielsen
      Josh Nielsen commented:
      Posted: on Jan 14, 2010 at 6:59 PM

      glad to help, I think it looks great.

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