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The bottom line is that this works, but just feels a bit disorganized and some detail work is needed. The background is still not working, use a plain white background. You have some inconsistencies with your text treatments. Try use some of the same treatments throughout the page. The navigation also looks a bit odd with the drop down and the highlight. I would try and rework them. I'm not trying to be negative here, but I'm just not diggin' this yet.
