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Firstly, the colours work fabulously together. Very bold without being overpowering. The layout is spacious and straightforward and delivers the message with ease. And finally, your choice of font only complements all of that.
Beyond that... I guess I can't say much more.
I know you're not trying to blow anyone away with this and for all intents and purposes, it works. But you could probably make it a tad more interesting somehow. My first thought would be to animate the poor guy, preferably in such a way that highlights the pain areas e.g. trying to write something down, tie a shoe or whatever. I know this might call for measures way beyond your client's budget but I'm just trying to give you an honest review. I think it looks great! But it has the potential to be even better.
Other than that, the starburst is bothering me. It works really well in these separated stills but I can't imagine it'll flow too well with the animation. I'd consider using it to accentuate the pain areas or the call-to-action and product/business name (if one exists).
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Jonathan Butko commented:Thanks for the rev.
I like what you are thinking with the animation of the character to put them in action... and it's not so much of a budgetary concern but deals more with an issue of timing.
Most likely this will be a 30 sec spot - and since the target demo will skew to the older side, i've found in my experience that the addition of too much animation becomes a distraction to the message... people will stop listening to the voiceover or reading the text (both of which have all the important info) and focus on the movement... to jam all of that into 30 seconds would render it ineffective...
that being said, it's all about balance right!
(I agree that the starburst needs to be toned down)
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I love the colors! Really well done.