A Review of Diabetic Nerve Pain 30 or 60 second TV Spot by Gem R

remove the green from text

  • Gem R

    Gem R

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    remove the green from text

    Posted on Jan 13, 2010 at 5:52 AM

    I think the colours do work. But the green writing makes the sentences less legible from a distance because the green and the blue are the same hue, so it gets slightly lost. Perhaps try having all the text in white?

    • Jonathan Butko
      Jonathan Butko commented:
      Posted: on Jan 13, 2010 at 8:43 AM

      excellent observation! thanks. I was working to create hierarchy with color... so the viewer would focus on the key "terms" and not so mush on the filler... but I agree that it is pushed a bit too far... I'll work on bringing them up a bit.

      Thanks for the rev.

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