A Review of Website redesign for nDzynes.com by Jonathan Butko

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  • Jonathan Butko

    Jonathan Butko

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
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    Posted on Jan 12, 2010 at 4:04 PM

    I like it... it's got some nice depth going on... it intrigues me, but if I were to take away the ambient BG the structure of the page itself is lacking needs a bit of tweaking.

    One suggestion would be to work on the middle portion - "Web Design & Development Perfected" and text underneath... it feels slapped on and floaty but not in a good way.

    Almost want to see the nav centered so it flows with that middle section better...

    There also seems to be a huge amount of dead space in the section where the logo is... i know it is to show of the BG... but if I was a client I'd be interested in seeing your work.

    I would love to see other pages with different types of content and how they work within this structure.

    cool though... keep going

    • Nathan Parikh
      Nathan Parikh commented:
      Posted: on Jan 12, 2010 at 5:55 PM

      I appreciate the feedback! I'll definitely consider your points.