A Review of Bolvar Solutions Home page by Aaran Casey

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  • Aaran Casey

    Aaran Casey

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    Posted on Jan 12, 2010 at 1:07 PM

    I am betting that english isn't your first language, thus there are grammatical mistakes in the text.

    I think it's a nice idea that you have an english version but be careful about the spelling and the direct translation.

    The design is nice, but a bit 2d, on one hand you have these beautifully illutsrated clouds in teh background and then you kind of ruin it with the balloons, with a drop shadow.

    Overall it needs a bit of work, I would say keep going and try to incorporate a bit more colour into the navigation and contact ares.

    Good Luck!

    • Roman Hromenkov
      Roman Hromenkov commented:
      Posted: on Jan 13, 2010 at 1:36 AM

      Thanks. Yes, my main language is Estonian, I will correct all mistakes in the text.