A Review of Frespiration! Logo by Patrick Niebrzydowski

Overall the logo looks pretty good. I prefer the "new version" to the alternate version as stretching the tagline makes it a little cramped for me. I might even try shrinking it down a little more.

You probably need to touch up the kerning around the "r" a little bit. It looks a little too close to the "i" and too far from the "a." It reads somewhat like "frespir ation."

Lastly, I might thin out the exclamation point at the end some. It draws a little too much attention as it is much thicker than the text, so you are taking away from the words.

Overall the design looks good though and just needs some fine-tuning.