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I like that the person is contained within the "o" in the first word. Nice creative use of the negative space. I agree with the other comments about the "2" being kerned closer to the other text. It appears that you may be on a time crunch and trying to just throw something together really fast. Take some time and do a lot of thumbnails. I'm not sure that the current logo is the best solution to your design problem. Try a completely different approach to this logo and see how it works out. Who knows, you may combine both designs to make something fantastic!
