A Review of Grin Party Website Layout (updated) by Ben Lind

Tiny changes

  • Ben Lind

    Ben Lind

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    Tiny changes

    Posted on Jan 08, 2010 at 10:29 PM

    The overall design of this is breathtaking. The colors and vectors really stand out from the crowd and draw you in.

    The only things I would change are very tiny. First, in the left navigation (under the Brochure graphic), I think it would look better if you either centered the links to the blue box or left-aligned them instead of center.

    Second, even though the green play button under the photos on the right side of the design should be self explanatory (I'm guessing it launches a slide-show for all of the images?), it never hurts to put some simple "Slideshow" text or whatnot to give the user a prod as to its function. It might help make the button look less lonely.

    Lastly, in the newsletter signup form in the footer, I would definitely change the "OK" to something more exciting like "Go!" or "Send". Something more...monkey-ish. ;)

    Overall, great design - love it!