• Amy Feger

    Amy Feger

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    Posted on Jan 08, 2010 at 3:33 PM

    Hi Angie,

    I love the monkey, he is cute.

    I just noticed a couple things that you may want to look at.

    Where you have "Breadcrumbs\ From Here \ To There" the "To There" looks like it is a different shade of blue compared to the other set of words in the line. ( If it is a link forget the comment I made.)

    I would maybe reword or consider changing the text size in your main text block so the word "Together" is not split to the next line. If you push the word "together" to the next line be sure to add a word so it doesn't sit there by itself. That second paragraph is one long sentence. Maybe consider making it two sentences.

    The shadows on the bottom scene on the monkey and tree scene is coming from one direction. Then the top monkey wrapped around the "G" has a shadow as though the light hits from a different direction. Also, consider the shadow that is also different on your three pics on the right.

    Maybe consider aligning the top of the set of the three pics on the right to the top of the "x-height" of your title "Text Headings - Sugar Pie". Since that line is much more stronger to align to, rather than to the top of the capital letters.

    The word "The" is spelt wrong in your last paragraph.

    Maybe either left align or center the links below the word "Brochure" to the word "Brochure."

    Overall, I like this concept and how you have the monkey on the letter "G".