A Review of Bacio Sparkles by Jonathan Butko

too many typefaces and hard to read

  • Jonathan Butko

    Jonathan Butko

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    too many typefaces and hard to read

    Posted on Jan 06, 2010 at 3:21 PM

    there is a lot going on and my eyes are bouncing all over the place. I lose the "title" in the swirlies and there isn't really any hierarchy to the information.

    • Ari Suardiyanti
      Ari Suardiyanti commented:
      Posted: on Jan 07, 2010 at 5:02 AM

      hehe, sorry for making your eyes bouncing all over it :p but thanks for the review :)

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    • Jonathan Butko
      Jonathan Butko commented:
      Posted: on Jan 07, 2010 at 11:44 AM

      Ha! No need to be sorry - that's why we're all here! I just don't know where to look first... which information is the most important for your message... a little bit of hierarchy will help

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