A Review of Bacio Sparkles by Aaran Casey

is sometimes better! I get what you are trying to achieve here but as Nate so rightly pointed out it's soo busy, that it's hard to read the text.

To many colours that are constarsting together, I alos think (getting back to the text) that it's all a bit skew wiff not straight, and is that was the effct then it needs to be done better.

below are examples of posters that stand out and and quitte a lot less busy:

http://www.flickr.com/photos/dannypigart/2406316521/

http://www.flickr.com/photos/skin3/2414461961/

http://www.flickr.com/photos/scrcreative/2655475116/in/photostream/

Good luck!