A Review of Bacio Sparkles by Billie Bryan

Amazing!

  • Billie Bryan

    Billie Bryan

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 5
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    Amazing!

    Posted on Jan 06, 2010 at 1:23 PM

    Right off the bat, I think this design is amazing! (I seem to be giving a lot of praise today lol but I'm being completely honest, I swear.)

    Your colour scheme is almost appetising, incorporating a lof of bright, bold reds, pinks, purples and blues - reminiscent of berries and candy. Your use of whitespace is very well executed and the text is laid out intelligently.

    My only peeve (and it's a tiny, tiny peeve...) is that there seems to be an overuse of font styles i.e. alternating colours, strokes, cases and the like. It hampers the continuity a little and can be a bit confusing. For example, I'm not sure exactly who's doing the music... is that an upside-down heart and a zero? Are DJ ai Whitelands and DJ Lola 7/24 JKT one person, two persons or three?

    I hope this helps! Nicely done though!

    • Ari Suardiyanti
      Ari Suardiyanti commented:
      Posted: on Jan 07, 2010 at 4:59 AM

      hehe, thanks :) though, I know this design should be better if I use better typography. The sparkling dj's were only 2 persons, the upside-down heart and a zero you saw was DJ ai Whitelands' logo. The thing is, if both of the main dj's had their logos, I could just put them easily. But the other one doesn't have one, and trying to match both of the names equally was a bit hard.