A Review of Bacio Sparkles by Chris Trinco

Better readability

  • Chris Trinco

    Chris Trinco

    Rank: 4 Master

    37

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    Better readability

    Posted on Jan 06, 2010 at 9:14 AM

    The colors and graphic are very engaging. Though the text gets lost. The date needs to be a thicker font. Possibly create a text lockup. That will help it sit better on the background. The band names, that will take a little more finesse. Placing a stroke on all text is a tad too much. The simple white outlined box in the lower left works quite well. Look at that system as a possible option.

    • Ari Suardiyanti
      Ari Suardiyanti commented:
      Posted: on Jan 07, 2010 at 4:48 AM

      yeah, thicker font should be used on it, I'll keep that in mind when designing such a colorful artwork ;)