A Review of Bacio Sparkles by Nate Hamilton

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  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 2
    1 Vote
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    Posted on Jan 06, 2010 at 8:11 AM

    I know I say this a lot about your designs, but if there is one thing I think you could do to make all of your design better, it would be to simplify them. This is very busy and hard to read in areas. The main title is very hard to read and barely legible. I would go back through this design and make sure everything is legible above all else.

    • Ari Suardiyanti
      Ari Suardiyanti commented:
      Posted: on Jan 07, 2010 at 4:46 AM

      I have to admit that sometimes I prefer the overall design to look catchy when designing these club event's artwork. As for the typography, I know that I should pay attention on it too. Thanks for the review :)