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Please excuse my frankness and honesty here but I really think this may be a redo. There are a lot of problems graphically here. Your spacing and alignment is really off in some places. Things feel squeezed, crowded and misaligned. Your repeating background is repeating but in a bad way. There are also consistency problems through out that need to be worked on. Feel free to ignore some or all of this but I think you really need to redo this.

Thanks Nate - this is exactly why I think CF is so good! I really appreciate your critique and will be rethinking the concept.