• Chris Beddoe

    Chris Beddoe

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    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
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    Icons

    Posted on Jan 06, 2010 at 4:50 AM

    I agree with what the other reviews are saying.

    I think you need to scrap the icons on the headings altogether, they scream clip art at me. I think the social media ones are ok, if a little large.

    The green does need pimping up a bit.

    Do you need the intro text under the welcome para? That will surely be in the about section. Maybe you could combine the two and shorten it.

    The serif font is a little hard to read for me. What if you did the headings in your marker pen style, and the text in the sans-serif font?

    I like the can and the grunge BG. But there does seem to be a bit too many mix of styles at the moment.