A Review of Art Gallery by Nate Hamilton

A couple of things...

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    A couple of things...

    Posted on Jan 04, 2010 at 8:09 AM

    This is a great start and looks very nice. However here are some of my concerns:

    1. Is your target market mostly women? If not I would seriously reconsider the largely feminine colors, illustrations and layout.

    2. The text area for the about us page is really heavy. Try and increase the line spacing.

    3. The right column looks a little unfinished and needs some refinement.

    Like I said, I think this looks really good so far, but just think you need to work through some of the details.

    • Serina Patterson
      Serina Patterson commented:
      Posted: on Jan 04, 2010 at 11:27 AM

      Thank you very much for your suggestons!

      Looking on the design again, I can see what you mean about the top text area and right sidebar.

      I shall post a new design soon.

      Cheers, Serina