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It took me a while to figure this one out. At first it looks like a circus, so you hit that well, but then I only thought this was a circus. It wasn't until I went to the website that I found out it was a club. Your target audience would probably know it's a club, or people in that town more so than myself.
I think it looks really good. The colors are really vibrant and catchy, things look to be in the right places and it has a lot of unification with the color and that sunburst in the background.
The only things I would modify would be some tiny font spacing, but I'm just picky about that and I know most clients would never see it anyways.
The page with "Thank you" I found it a little hard to read the right aligned text. We're well trained to read left to right so with the left side being all over the place I skipped over it a lot easier.
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I didn't really think about the right alignment until you mentioned it. You're right about that, we're all trained to read left to right. Thanks for the advice/review :) definitely will consider the paragraph alignment on next project.