A Review of Logo for SEO and Webdesign Company by Jonathan Butko

Spark needs to simplify

  • Jonathan Butko

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    Spark needs to simplify

    Posted on Dec 31, 2009 at 10:16 AM

    I know that this is for a web company, but I imagine at some point this logo would show up in print. That being said, the spark becomes muddled in form especially when you consider having to shrink it down in size.

    When you take a few steps back from the screen to simulate a reduction in size, the lines become blurred together and it ends up looking like a spiked ball... or those mines they used at sea in WWII to destroy ships and subs...

    I think reducing the spark's complexity would go a long way

    • Michael Moran
      Michael Moran commented:
      Posted: on Jan 05, 2010 at 11:21 AM

      Any thoughts on how to simplify the spark? Thanks for your feedback.

    • Jonathan Butko
      Jonathan Butko commented:
      Posted: on Jan 08, 2010 at 3:36 PM

      sorry it took me so long to get back... don't know if you have done anything to it... but if you look at reducing the number of lines in the spark it would help it breathe a bit at smaller sizes