A Review of Wedding website by Kyle Scollin

Refinement

  • Kyle Scollin

    Kyle Scollin

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    Refinement

    Posted on Dec 30, 2009 at 11:31 PM

    You're going in the right direction. There's a few things that look like they need cleaning up. The blending of the guy's hair, there is a lot of white pieces. The gradient behind the words s too noticeable, and I feel like the green button bar is not too attractive. Perhaps toning back that green a bit would help. I really like the embellishments on the small photos, and the main gray background is really nice. Keep it up.

    • Andy E
      Andy E commented:
      Posted: on Dec 31, 2009 at 9:00 AM

      Thanks for the feedback, Kyle. The photo is temporary - the bride and groom haven't supplied me with their photos yet. I'm not sure what you mean by "the gradient behind the words is too noticeable". Could you please explain?

      I've toned down the border around the boxes, replaced the swirl at the top with something nicer, and removed the glow behind the title text. I'll submit a revised concept soon.

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