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It's a great idea, however all of the concepts are lacking professionalism.
I think it might work better if the supermum was incorporated into the typography somehow.
The font choice is a bit flat, I would suggest something like all lowercase chapparal pro std or if you want serif lowercase DIN.
Stick to 3 colours, remember if you want to reproduce this in black & white it still needs to be clear what it is.
It's a good start but it needs a bit more work... Good luck!
