• Andrew Follett

    Andrew Follett

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    Fonts

    Posted on Dec 30, 2009 at 11:50 AM

    Love the idea and the "mum" illustration, however, I think you're right - the color is a little much and the fonts could use some change-up. Currently the "SUPERMUM" title font/color reminds me of Spiderman or a horror movie.

    I would experiment with some other styles and colors (I think the red is okay, or even orange, but something that pops isn't a bad idea). The tagline below could also use a tweak - right now the two fonts don't complement each other too well.

    Upload some variations when you can, I'd like to see some other options. Nice start!

    • Garden Book
      Garden Book commented:
      Posted: on Dec 30, 2009 at 12:13 PM

      Thanks for your fast rely and feedback. My designer partner also agrees with you about the SuperMum font looking to much like a horror film or like spiderman.

      Do you think that the concept suites the target audiance of urban middle income mother?

      I have updated the strap line on the website.

    • Andrew Follett
      Andrew Follett commented:
      Posted: on Dec 30, 2009 at 4:01 PM

      I think the illustration/style is fitting, but the fonts could use some work. Erica said it pretty well too. Experiment with some more "professional" fonts and colors and see what you come up with. I think you're close.