A Review of memon apparel by Sam Gordon

stroke on the lemon.

  • Sam Gordon

    Sam Gordon

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    stroke on the lemon.

    Posted on Dec 29, 2009 at 10:54 PM

    I like it, save for the subtly of the lemon. It blends with the m and the n too well, and doesn't stand out from the background. So my first thought was giving it a nice stroke, maybe just cut away a 2 or 3 px wide portion of the m and the n right along the edge of the lemon. So that the lemon isn't overlapping the m or the n, but rather cutting it away.

    Also, i prefer the ones where the L is more grey, as it fits with the other letters in apparel. In the very top image, i didn't even notice the l was an l on apparel, because it was green, so i thought it was just a fancy descender for the end.

    Good job so far.