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John I don't mind this, and I know how hard it is to do up something for a Mortgage Broker. Pretty sure MFAA have some style guidelines that might help you solve that problem - the broker should have been issued with this when they changed from MIAA a while back.
It might just be me, but the people don't look quite right. Outside the other comments - I think my issue is that the lady appears that she is bigger than the man (using a ruler this would appear to be correct), and with her being behind him, this is just magnified.
