A Review of memon apparel by Andy E

enhance the lemon

  • Andy E

    Andy E

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    enhance the lemon

    Posted on Dec 28, 2009 at 8:55 AM

    I agree with most of Eric's feedback. The lemon looks too flat and the leaf is drawing more attention than the lemon. It probably isn't needed. I like how the a is in the middle of the m in the first and third designs. You should probably stick to some space or no space between each letter (not a mix of the two).

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