A Review of memon apparel by Eric Buchmann

I think the lemon could use a little more definition, sort of like how the leaf has the line in it. I'm not entirely sure if the leaf is needed or not.

In general some of the kerning on the letters could be tighter so there isn't a thin line between them and the e and r could be brought down a pixel or two to be in line with the other letters, just to clean it up some. There is also a slight pixel of the background between the bottom left of the lemon and the m. (just really picky about these things...)

I seem to be jumping between being able to read the l in apparel and not being able to tie it to the rest of the word. Maybe the gradient could go from green to yellow, then to the gray color in apparel so it ties in more? May just make an ugly color though and not be worth it.

I like the top two colorings, the bottom was way too much yellow for me.