A Review of Teen / Young Adult Depression Poster by Drew Watkins

Appeal to a wider range of people

  • Drew Watkins

    Drew Watkins

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 2
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    Appeal to a wider range of people

    Posted on Dec 25, 2009 at 11:43 PM

    In high school myself, I know that not only goths and emos suffer from depression. In fact I know several cheerleaders who suffer from it. I think that if you made the poster appeal to a wider audience it would work better.

    I really like the design though. It's very original. Try making the contact information bigger and the wording less. When I first looked at it, I would have wanted to just keep going. The design was neat, but uninviting. Also, I know I would want to visit the website more than make a phone call, so try emphasizing that a bit more.