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Nice concept, but rather than power, it has a (skinny) feminine vibe. You want something bolder. This looks dated.
The second is too gel-like, messy because of the fades; the elements merge into each other. You could try bringing the green ends closer to the circle to "rein it in" more.
You want variations of these with stronger, bolder proportions.

thnx 4 da sugessions