Maybe check out how other ampersands look with the first one? It's not bad, I just like the ones that look more like a G than a q...

1 maybe try to give "accessories" a little more breathing room, it's pretty crowded in there compared to "clothes &"

3 reads CC - andy andy to me

4 is too blocky

Just an idea, not even sure how it would work - For the first change "clothes" to "clothing", remove the "&" and attempt to make the first "y" into an ampersand, although it may make it look completely awkward...