A Review of Teen / Young Adult Depression Poster by Philip Meissner

Needs a stronger call to action.

  • Philip Meissner

    Philip Meissner

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    10

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 4
    2 Votes
    Needs a stronger call to action.

    Posted on Dec 22, 2009 at 9:14 PM

    Strong piece Jon. I would agree with the most of the previous comments. Some thoughts: 1. try bumping the weight of the "keeping you down?" to match the "Is depression" 2. adding some copy above the phone # so responders know what their calling. 3. did you try making the "rust/fire" off her back dark to contrast the light below. it seems my eyes are pulled in two directions. Up to the light and to the headline. Maybe that's good thing?

    Great job! Always pushing the clinical trials envelope!

    • Jonathan Butko
      Jonathan Butko commented:
      Posted: on Dec 22, 2009 at 9:38 PM

      I knew you were going to tell me to bump up that font weight... I kept looking at it thinking what would Phil do and that was on top of the list...

      I think I like the tension created by the two areas of light but I'll give it a go on darkening that up and seeing how it looks...

      Lastly... I feel like your last comment may be mocking me!? Thanks for the review.

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