A Review of Teen / Young Adult Depression Poster by James Wilson

More suble transition on girl's head.

  • James Wilson

    James Wilson

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    More suble transition on girl's head.

    Posted on Dec 22, 2009 at 3:30 PM

    I like it a lot. The mood ring is troubled in this one I see.

    The type is fragile and obviously on a downward trend - good.

    Nice use of the grid and textures.

    I think maybe give her eye some more emphasis so my eye has a starting point. Brightening her face would be counter to the state of mind.