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I don't know if you used different weighted fonts but the "jeca" definitely does seem slightly weaker than the "garments." Since garments already pops first, I might try a slightly heavier weight on jeca–if that is even possible. Also, in garments, the "g" and "a" seem a little crashed together whereas the "e" and "n" are nearly luxuriating with space.
As an exercise, you might try both blowing up the logo and shrinking it down–that tends to help when trying to determine legibility (even if the logo doesn't end up being used at a super large or super small size).
I am mostly nitpicking though. I think the JG shirt is great and I agree with the other reviewers that it's definitely better without the divider.

thank you for that very detailed review...i think you're right about the jeca weaker than the garments...wow, you actually saw something like the kerning...i will adjust them a bit...^_^