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The text alignment looks very suspicious in some places. In the [Services We Offer] box in the sidepanel I can identify at least 5 different text alignment points.
However having said that I also think that this page is missing the small details that seperate ordinary pages from good pages. You have a good base layout but now its time to add some passion and to be a perfectionist about things.
For example: [ email address ] [ subscribe] What am i subscribing to here? An rss feed? A newsletter? Company Promotions? Add an icon or something that makes this clear. If its RSS then an RSS icon.
In your feature area, where you have the [project description:] text you need a call to action. A [read more] button or something like that. You have presented the information now you want to guide the user to do something about that.
The Home buton in the navigation looks like its not sitting exactly in the middle of the button.
This could be my eyes playing tricks on me but the [ Go ] button next to the search seems to be of a different style to your [ subscribe ] and [ view more services we offer ] button.
You seem to be using a few too many different fonts.
You seem to be using anti-aliasing on all of the text and I think there are gradients on the heading texts. How are you going to implement this in a practical way?
I can go on but I think you get the point. Its a beautiful website but its lacking those small touches that only somebody who is very passionate about designing websites would take their time to do.
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Kyle Stiens-Magill commented:I really like the background image! Gives the website a nice feel! Overall not that keen on scrolling as much as you would here but if you need all the info on the main page then tuff! Well done!
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Thank you, I was looking for a really in-depth review like this. I appreciate your time for writing the review and I will look into it. I've made about 5 different version of this and I've tended to over-look a lot of things.