• Miro

    Miro

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    It is ok

    Posted on Dec 14, 2009 at 11:15 AM

    Hi Shane! I think your page looks all right. Do just some minor tweaks and you´ll see it yourself.

    1) add an empty line between the paragraphs (And align the first lines also to left) 2) add subheadlines 3) make the "Interesting quote" a bit smaller so that you get some empty space around it 4) add a 1 pixel stroke around the image 5) change the color of the "Interesting quote" to for example blue, it is a bit pale right now.

    Oh, and the first one (menu) is the best I think.

    • Miro
      Miro commented:
      Posted: on Dec 14, 2009 at 11:18 AM

      ...And please show us the results after you have modified the layout.

    • Shane Kingery
      Shane Kingery commented:
      Posted: on Dec 14, 2009 at 5:20 PM

      Okay, Miro. The modification is up. I had a difficult time adding a stroke (and drop shadow as suggested by someone else) because I couldn't figure out how to get a drop shadow all the around the image. So, I duplicated the picture, turned it black and added a gaussian blur to it. Not sure how that works. Let me know what you think of this revision.

      Thanks again, by the way, for all your help.

    • Miro
      Miro commented:
      Posted: on Dec 18, 2009 at 12:57 PM

      Hi, the fifth one looks very good. How I would still modify that is that I would make the text on the left -The chuch in Kenya is...- darker gray or maybe the same blue as you have used elsewhere. And you do not have use italics on the subheadlines, bold is enough.