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I just got done panicking my self I have a brochure layout that has bit the dust and I am suppose to show Monday - I understand panic.
Sub pages are sub-pages it would be nice if everything knocked over the audience/clientele however its reasonable to have filler in the mix.
From what I can tell the top page (of the 3 here) is fine - its almost for sure as the real text goes into the quote so shall the image change I would ride the wave and see where your real content takes you -again nothing much wrong with the top one.
The second one has nothing substantially improved so i'm ignoring it.
Is the 3rd one depicting a drop down menu ?if so it is extremal interesting and the color choice is dynamite.
I think you are doing really well stick to your guns.
I don't go to opensource galleries any more but I know some designers like to get lost in the millions of xhtml ,css templates there are out there. Sometimes I send customers to look at template galleries so I can get a sense of where they see value or (gulp)art. You may get some inspiration you may not but for sure as a beginner you are way ahead of most so chin up and dig in.
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Robert Tipping commented:1,3&4 look good 2 me I'm not keen on 2 although there is nothing really wrong with it it knocks my sense of balance. I am looking forward to the site live.
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Thanks so much for your input, Robert. I really appreciate it! The drop down menu is kind of bold. Too bold? I was thinking of pulling some of the bright colors in the palate to be the different drop down navs. I've just updated the concept, so let me know what you think.