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I love the font, but just don't think it is right for this company's image. It is a bit too casual with a bit too much character of its own - I.E. the 'g' and 'i' draw attention to themselves a bit more than it should. I like the colors and the underlying concept. But, I would try different wing shapes. The current wing feels more like a quill or flame and is a bit to cartoon-like with the combination of simple shape and thick stroke. Are there other shapes that would balance with the words better? Both versions here feel lopsided. Is there a wing shape that subtly references an airplane wing? Even if it is based on a bird's wing, it can at least be in shape that looks less like it is sticking out of the top of robin hoods cap and more like it is soaring in the sky like a plane?
