A Review of Sleek Black Portfolio by Kyle Scollin

the wording

  • Kyle Scollin

    Kyle Scollin

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    the wording

    Posted on Dec 07, 2009 at 8:16 PM

    This is looking really nice. Lots of white space to allow the eyes some space to move around. I feel like since the words will be the first thing a visitor will read, it might need some rewording. The word "things" seems kind of vague and perhaps unnecessary. You could just say "with a knack for design." Also the next sentence starts with the word "Combined" and I'm not sure what that refers to. Perhaps its supposed to all be one sentence "I'm a web guy with a knack for design, combined with ..."

    I dig the wood texture. As my friend says "Everything looks better on a wood background" haha.

    • Codedude
      Codedude commented:
      Posted: on Dec 08, 2009 at 10:16 AM

      I changed it slightly as you advised...