A Review of Portfolio Homepage by Stefan Harris

the copy

  • Stefan Harris

    Stefan Harris

    Rank: 7 Student

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
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    the copy

    Posted on Dec 07, 2009 at 11:04 AM

    Overall I like it, not to much of a fan of the copy but if the audience your targeting is cool with "what's crackin'" go for it.

    • Kyle Scollin
      Kyle Scollin commented:
      Posted: on Dec 07, 2009 at 12:12 PM

      Thanks man, I'm trying to figure out if the copy is too informal. I really want to be personal and make people remember me quickly, especially when they'll probably only look at the site for a few seconds. So I thought that having a catchy line like "what's crackin" would instantly get their attention and let them remember me.

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