A Review of Web Store design for Kathryn Ireland by Miranda Sehl

try removing the outlines

  • Miranda Sehl

    Miranda Sehl

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    try removing the outlines

    Posted on Dec 07, 2009 at 10:27 AM

    Hi Jeff, i think this is looking quite nice so far. I was thinking that removing the boxes around the pillows might help improve, you would have to align the text below to the edge of the pillow, and i agree with Ovi about adding the dimensions, because it is hard to tell how big the pillows are.. but i wouldnt turn the pattern into only a swatch.. i like seeing the pillows on the white background. nice job getting them on photographed and available on white! i know thats a struggle. I actually like the serif font on the right top nav. it might look good in lowercase too.. did you try that? i think it looks good as is.. a fabric texture would be good to apply to the pink on the header and footer. the site is very fabric rich, might be good to make the design match. beautiful job so far, keep going! :)